Evaluation: Question 4

Log: Newspaper Advertisement Textual Analysis

Text Analysis 1

Log: Double Page Spread Review Textual Analysis

DPS Textual Analysis

Research: Final Audience Feedback on Products

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1DzQ4pvikvFLR3guA0T-YK7_RvYxEbGCEUsha_EZsYSE/viewform

Log: Unimproved Documentary Extract

This is my documentary extract without the final improvements that I was suggested to change by my target audience. The improvements I have made are in the post below.

Log: Improvements

-Sailing footage to be added
-Voiceover in the end (concluding points) "this year 10 students have offers from Oxbridge"
-Blip
-"I'm in Essex Girl" at the very beginning
-Youtube boxes "challenging stereotype" on evaluation 3

Production: Editing My Documentary

Today I added in some music to the ending of my extract to round it up and keep the audience entertained. As it is an extract I don't particularly need a distinct ending therefore, there isn't an end to it it just cuts off and left to be continued.