-Make the focus of the documentary more explicit e.g. voiceover - "I've travelled to Essex to explore the myth of the 'Essex Girl'"
-Film/voiceover of Anna stating her ambitions for the future like Charlotte does
-Get facts and figures to insert as text e.g. number of grammar schools in Essex and Essex University
-Initially Charlotte fits the stereotype of an Essex girl with blonde hair and a slim physique but her attitudes are different to Anna's.
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